ben malberg:

Hey, I like your idea it's original. I couldn't see the email it was too fast. I would spend some time on the timing of that cut to the computer screen. I

Ejen Shafiq Isa:

nice work! but kinda awkward cutting to a static shot like that in the middle of the scene

Yuri Marcel Vieira:

pretty neat! just the lip sync seems a little off

roy cobn:

i don't think that the cut to the letter works.

Nebiat Yifru:

The edit showing the text needed to be shown at a better time, like at the beginning, before the character dialog starts.

Ian Wallace:

Poorly executed idea. The e-mail that apparently excited her was only on the screen for a brief moment, so we couldn't read it.

Travis Stowell:

what's with the letter flashing in the middle of the anim?

Rosario Salvatore:

animation is pretty descent but there is a distracting glitch at frame 165 you really needed to fix for my vote

Joyce Makker:

Pretty good, but the flash of the email was way too short to grasp what it was, I had to pause to see.