john:

synch kinda off, very scary animation

ben malberg:

I like the camera sweep in the beginning, and the lighting is super cool. The animation needs some work though. Interesting idea.

Jesse Angri:

Impressive render, but you should really work on that after you have good animation.

Justin Jones:

Please, no seizure inducing visuals. It distracts too much from how the animation actually looks.

David Borja:

Awesome setting! However the face looks very stuck. In a sequence when you're focusing so much on the characters face, you need it to feel human. Keep practicing!

Amartya Mukherji:

was this a horror movie?

Animation seems to be very weak. Lacks fundamentals

Nadia Ammari:

the lip sync is really bad

Moby:

Lighting is too distracting.