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Animator: Florian

Description: The Guy is drunken and he is dancing on the roof...

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 3 week

Comments:

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Justin Jones:

I'll note at least two things: with the ending 'snap' of the antenna, the boy just simply pulls it towards him before falling despite already leaning over the ledge. The leg at 59-64 breaks a bit. Overall, there's quite a bit can be improved upon. Hoping to see improvements with your next works.

Valentious Williams:

First of all i question your ability to think before you leap . You place a female voice on a male character and worst of its a litle boy . My point being is that your performance should be believable . Make things seem possible even if it may not .The animation its self really went in the right direction , some stronger poses should have been present to really sell this shot to us .Hope to see u do even more next time around .Id keep my eyes on this .

ben malberg:

It's a funny idea, and I laughed when the antenna broke. I think it needs a lot more work but the idea is good.

Tobias Fuhr:

how the spin takes 168-frame to 220-frame you could make 2 or 3 turns to put more action at scene

roy cobn:

but its clearly a woman's voice..why a kid?

Brent Forrest:

I like your choices - animation is not prostar, but your acting direction made me smile - at least its different.