Jim Levasseur:

Not sure what's going on here --- is he playing all three parts? If so, why? Who is this character and what is his motivation?

Staging is poor.

Extremely pose-to-pose (break down body parts with more overlap.. what arrives first/next/last, etc.)

Julianne McCartney:

You've got a lot of strong poses here, some seem overacted though.

Taber Dunipace:

I'm not quite sure what's happening.

Josh Doohen:

confusing environment, is that a mirror in the middle of space? some good movement...just needs lips moving.

Sunny Kharbanda:

Watch his balance around frame 170.. he looks quite weightless there. The spinning action also feels too light and his body is too straight up as it spins.

Erik Westlund:

The combination of poses chosen is completely arbitrary and without logic towards the end. Where are these other characters? Why is he suddenly backed up against the mirror? Poses start, stop, start, stop.

Aaron Clement:

Didn't gell for me. His actions don't suit the dialogue.