Phil!
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Taber Dunipace:
Nice unique premise! Some parts need details added and to be smoothed but overall this is great!
Julianne McCartney:
This was funny. Good animation overall.
Alberto Abril:
Hey great work. I really like the homeless guy's reaction at the end, and the exchange between the couple. They could use some cheek jiggle though...
Tyson Ibele:
Haha...I thought this one was very well done...loved the gag.
Tom Law:
His pose around frame 300 is brilliant, very well done.
Ken Rice:
Not a bad animation - however I think it would help if you see the couple give the chap the coin.
Elliott Gibson II:
A little too fast in some parts.
Also poses could have been pushed to really get across some feeling and appeal! good job!
Emmanuel:
Kinda confusing why he calls him Phil when he doesn't know him? Too many camera angles also.
Levi:
the concept isn't working.
James Parsons:
I enjoyed this, thought it jumped in a bit at the start, but ended really strongly.
HARISH:
i did not get the exact concept. could do better on animation. good effort though. keep it up.
Richard Bannister:
Nice.
Erik Westlund:
Main character's shift from down and out to "best day of my life" is too sudden as a story element and jumps visually. The pushy nature of the destitute character is a nice setup for the reaction of the other characters. Your staging is good, the sequence of shots is pretty seamless and makes a lot of sense. Gestures at the end are too forced and unnatural. Try to avoid doing the same action with both hands if you can.
Jason Smith:
This is one cool bum. Great poses.
Juan Z.:
really funny nice work.
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
Nice job. The setup is a bit odd but your move are nice and tight. I find some things though:
The first move before "Phil" is a little too fast, I think it needs some more anticipation, build the energy a bit, although I'm not sure if it fits the acting.
The expressions on the couple's faces on "Mine too" (f142-ish) could use some tweaking, having their eyes wide open makes them look alert not relaxed to say that's the best day of their life. The pose on the girl is very awkward, her hip is on a weird angle not being followed by the rest of the spine. Also the camera placement is a bit odd, I would have put the characters on screen right, so it's cleared that they're talking to the guy, also a little bit shorter shot.
The very next shot has the same problem with the camera.
Nice bit of animation on the "Let's not spoil it", nicely timed.
I find the hands don't move to much on the male character.
I liked the "I got that" but I feel he has a very neutral expression, tweak it a bit, I'm not sure what's he thinking.
Again, a nice piece, good job!
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Alexandar Ivanchev:
Great Animation .. I just think when the couple leaves they start walking too fast ..
Max Rodriguez:
Really good. I think he should be looking in their direction at the start of the shot. Seems the camera could of been set differently, one shot he's on the right, then the left, my eyes don't know where to look.
Meng:
I like the animation, but it some how dosen't quite fit the situation of the voices
Aaron Clement:
Nice... I like the exaggeration in here. The animation felt fun. Maybe a tad cliche... but definitly one of the better ones.
Simon Ridge:
Nice poses, possibly could do with a little more smoothing in places, but love the way you've animated them as a pair.









Animator: Lindsay Thompson
Description: Homeless man has the greatest day of his life...
Experience: 3 years
Time taken: 4 days