Happy 75th Birthday!
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Taber Dunipace:
Very floaty throughout and a very awkward camera move. I do like the concept but this needs some more work. Keep at it!
Mike York:
I love the blindfold Idea me and my friends were batting that idea around :-)
Joe Garhan:
not to bad, i your overall idea but the camera move to reveal it was so harsh it took away from the moment
elizabeth:
no timming.
Cassandra:
Nice lead!
Ken Rice:
Good effort here - however I think the animation tends to be floaty throughout and IK looks switched on in the hands of the purple character. Also, just wondering if the reveal at the end couldn't be smoother (more natural).
Levi:
i like the concept. The animation falls short.
Greg M. Johnson:
Good secondary movement. Maybe needs some more primary movement to show more expressiveness.
Alexandar Ivanchev:
It's an interesting scenario. I think that you still have to do some work on the animation it seems a bit floaty and poppy in a couple of places. I like the camera framing in the beginning but I am not sure about the camera movement ... it seems too much. Maybe a cut from the back would be a nice alternative.
Patrick Algermissen:
A little stiff, though not bad. Clever ending, but not sure that the "I got that" made sense in this context -- what was it that he got?
Tim Nowak:
I like how you put this. the animation need work because this looks like they are in need of some medication. They are too stiff. good work thought. keep going.lol
Ceno:
good
Erik Westlund:
The walk cycles are mechanical and lack weight. Seated (green) character wrists appear to be broken while he is clapping. Don't animate characters doing things that would hurt you to perform. Camera move is jerking around awkwardly.
Beth:
Just a bit floaty
Max Rodriguez:
Walk cycle needs a lot of work.Looks like shes underwater.
Aaron Clement:
I got confused with who was the girl in this... maybe if we sore some of the background passing by would have helped, also.









Animator: Paul Schneider
Description: Phil and his middle-aged sister have a special surprise for their father's 75th birthday...
Experience: Not much. My first full body animation.
Time taken: In the little free time I had over the month...