Mike York:

I like some of your acting choices but I think that you just need to practice the curve editor some more and you'll get the hang of things soon. Its getting there.

Jason:

posing is a little stiff, but you are on the right track. keep in mind the principals of animation when planning their actions. the champagne throw is a little awkward

Taber Dunipace:

Whoa, some strange mechanical things going on. Try to get more natural poses for your characters and be careful to let each pose related to the others.

elizabeth:

whats with the hands?

Emmanuel:

The animation feels a bit linear

jonathan fontaine:

good scenario
you should try to make your moves more "clear", and think about "gravity" I mean, when you lean for example you have to control your gravity point by moving your hip or your legs...

Jerome Heuze:

I don't think the story really fits the sound track.

Christopher Salamat:

Needs a lot of mechanical work. Arms seem to just be thrown a round like a marionette. Hands are stiff. The drunkness is not woking.

Erik Westlund:

Actions are not supported by poses. Characters are, for the most part, like fence posts with waving arms. Movement is swings between poppy/jerky and "floaty".

Aaron Clement:

Okay, why is the girl a guy? What's with the random movements?