Julianne McCartney:

I like that last slap on the knee the woman gives. Very nice animation overall.

Taber Dunipace:

Nice natural motion and clear acting choices.

Ken Rice:

Not a bad animation - however a bit confusing with Phil not being in the shot at the start.

Joe Mitchell:

nice bit with the extra sounds in the audio

Senthilnathan D:

good...

Juan Z.:

good job just work on it a bit.

Jason Smith:

That chair is ginormous!! I love when 'Alfred' runs into the scene at the beginning. Nice work.

Erik Westlund:

I like how you handle the rhythm of pats on the knees of the female character. A lot of the hand gestures of the male character are not quite on the mark. Left hand reaching out on "life" seems artificial. Finger point at the end seems artificial. In the middle with the left hand extended on "where are we going?", hands clapped together, and then fingers laced... all of these gestures are believable,

Christiaan Moleman:

Nicely done. The only thing that doesn't work for me is the left arm gesture around "life", maybe if you didn't put it quite so far out to the side...

James Stevenson:

There's some subtlety in this one that's missing from a lot of others I've seen so far, good work in resisting the urge to have your characters over-act.

Chris:

I love it when she claps her hands against her knees- great choice.

RJay Bengelink:

I liked the read of the slapping sound. You covered that the best of the ones I've reviewed.