Mike York:

I like your acting choices just looks like it needs to be finished up a tad.

Marshall:

Like where you are going with this.

Jason:

awkward motions. stiff unfinished animation

Taber Dunipace:

Nice blocking! I think this'd be a great scene to finish out, nice relationships and not too much action going on.

Ken Rice:

Not bad - found it a bit jerky though with my eye being misled at some points in the animation (difficult to know where to look at times).

Greg M. Johnson:

The staging of the characters relative to each other is excellent. I like the symbolism of the jerk putting his bottle between the other two. Needs more polish with lip sync, etc.

Radhika:

somehow the movements are a little robotic..maybe vary the speed in places?

Tim Nowak:

cool set up but not complete. not complete at all

Eric Scheur:

I really like what you've done with the staging here. Very clear, and meaningful with the way that Yellow breaks in between Orange and Purple. You've made it clear what a nuisance this guy is.

It looks like you might not have really gotten into smoothing out a lot of the animation yet, though. So I won't comment much on that, except to say that you might have to be careful about how long it takes a person to move from one place to the next. Some of your poses feel like they arrive a bit quickly--but until this is all at a further stage of animation, it's difficult to say for sure.

Erik Westlund:

Too early in the process to say much, but it seems like you haven't worked out the repetitive slapping in the audio. Female turning away seems arbitrary.

Dhiraj:

Not complete??

Christiaan Moleman:

Your pose choices are not bad, but you're basically letting the computer interpolate from one pose to the next most of the time which ends up looking really robotic.

Good start, but work on those inbetweens.

Max Rodriguez:

Seems like a work in progress. I'm liking the idea though

Aaron Clement:

I got the feeling this one isn't done yet. It needs to be taken out of linear.