Happy Couple

Final Rating: 5.28. Finished: 20 out of 85 entries.
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Animator: Maureen Seng

Description: Adoring girlfriend with excited bloke talking to their friend Phil. This is my first entry to this competition.

Experience: about 2 years

Time taken: 4 days

Comments:

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Taber Dunipace:

Very nice lips sync! Really seemed like the character was speaking. Also the gestures come across as natural so big points there.

Greg M. Johnson:

I like the expressions on the woman.

James Lane:

I thought your animation was pretty good, only crit I have is to watch the symmetry on the mouth.

Matthew Simkins:

nice framing and great pose at 245.

Victor Wong:

Nice expressions!

Ken:

I like the animation overall. I just have some comments for the animation of the guy. His hip seems to be staying still, and fixed at one spot throughout. I suggest moving is hip a little , that might make his movement look more natural. Also, I suggest when the guy asked "Where're we going" you could make him look at the camera instead, so he's actually directing the question to the 3rd guy. Then it'll be more appropriate for the girl to say "let's not spoil it", as she didn't want to spoil the private moment she and the guy can have. And then it was only later the guy realized that and said "I got it". That might bring the idea across better.

andyM:

liked some of your eye stuff, but lipsync could use some work.
a bit smiley and wide most of the time.
"where are we going" looks much better than the first line

arms seem a bit lost at times too, especially the left one.

shows potential, nice staging

Adam Clark:

I like the staging, I know where my eye should be, pretty good timing

lucas:

i like this

Michael Cawood:

The lady is a bit 'stop starty' and the guy seems a bit stiff, but otherwise, good work.

Erik Westlund:

Male character's mouth stays the same width for almost the entire sequence. You are starting to show a little weight in the movement between the two characters but you are going to need more 'physical' evidence in how they interact.

Jason Smith:

I love the guy's expressions. Sweet job.

Max Rodriguez:

Well done

Aaron Clement:

I like the 'Oh' expression... Some good acting in here.