Tomas Jech:

Good acting choices. I think this is a case where, even though lighting isn't supposed to matter, some lights would help more clearly separate the characters from the background- and help the animation be visible.

Elliott Gibson II:

Nice composition! video seems to have problems playing.... characters seem rather stiff and rigid...some flexibility looks liked its needed. good start!

Jerome Heuze:

very good animation overall, i wish it would a better rendering instead of a playblast. i think the main character (brown shirt) should be reviewed because the sat position is a bit odd.

gerardo castellanos:

don’t have rythm, is the same level of action all time

Tim Nowak:

Good place to do this but needs more movement and expression. Good work

Henning Koczy:

exaggerate. Get laughing guy's whole body into it.

Erik Westlund:

Audio for "Phil, this is the best day of my life" has much more intensity than what you have animated. Staging isn't bad but there is a lot of clutter in the middle of the three characters. Most of the items are not needed. I like how you hit, "Where are we going?" Nice Line-of-action, nice move into pose. Actions for all characters, especially focal character on left, would read a lot better, have more energy, with more use of anticipations.

Ron Price:

I like the staging and the way you kept everything subtle, but were still able to switch the focus to each character as necessary. Making the guy on the right do essentially nothing while keeping him alive just a bit was an excellent and disciplined choice.

The red shirt guy could probably have used some broader or clearer attitudes, though.

Chris:

Kudos on animating all three characters, but none felt distinct. Alfred's laughing bit at the end was rather lackluster. For an enthusiastic laugh in the dialogue, he simply sat still with his eyes open- it didn't match up.

Max Rodriguez:

Lower half of the body is so motionless, seems there could be more secondary action