Mike York:

I really like your acting choices and staging. Nice Job!

Taber Dunipace:

I'm interested in what's going on, but not really sure what the joke is. I know this month's was a hard one but on the plus side, your animation and acting is appealing.

Zachariah Mathew:

Nice set up...but i feel like there are too many unnecesary camera cuts...and maybe thats taking away from the animation.

Jason:

nice scene. the shots are a little fast and too frequent, i can't tell which characters are talking. nice poses though

Ken Rice:

Pretty good animation but I found the camera jumping around off putting.

Virgil Tanasa:

cool, maybe the facial expressions could have been better, but i like the approach you took :)

Gao:

the camera cuts are very awkward and uncomfortable, try to keep them to a minimum

Maureen Seng:

the camera cuts are a bit too quick to register what's going on. but i do like the idea of the story.

Adam juhasz:

I like the whole scene setup, but the intense cuts just take away from the performances of each character...the end is stronger

Ümit Dönmez:

not enough movement of the main character...

Greg M. Johnson:

Nice development of character.

Jerome Heuze:

hard to see

Daniel Luke:

Really great animation, but I just find myself becoming confused at what's going on.

Christopher Salamat:

The way the girl is animated doesn't seem to work well with her facing away. When you cut to the girl's dialog i think you should be close to the girl because you can't read her.

Tim Nowak:

Good animation and nice flow.

Sunny Kharbanda:

Good work on the animation, but the camera cuts distracted me from enjoying the piece fully.

Aaron Clement:

Hmm... not bad. Some of the timing felt off... too much moving at the end... was unclear as to whom was speaking. I like the composited look.

Henning Koczy:

The cut on "where are we going?" is awkward, I would've liked the speakers framed more clearly... but really good.

Erik Westlund:

I think you have a great setup for explaining character motivations, especially for the female character, but your staging and camera moves are too big, too sudden, and distracting from the story. Middle character need a hot dog or hamberger to be trying to dress with ketchup. Its not obvious that he is trying to apply lotion. Movement isn't bad especially regarding weight, very convincing. Background is seriously competing for attention and diminishing quality of performances. Good solution to challenge presented in audio.

David Shum:

good animation, cuts felt a little fast xD
I like it

sharad kumar:

good!..but u missed the laugh on the other character!

Pablo Piccione:

Exceleente moves!

Jason Smith:

Great use of the sound effects on the suntan lotion bottle.

Chris de Souza:

This was pretty good, but there are way too many camera moves in here. You're cutting between 3 different shots when I think you should have used two. Just the two long shots would have been fine. Good job though!

James Stevenson:

Some nice animation - for me there are a few too many quick cuts to different camera angles, and your eye just doesn't have time to take in the characters between each one. Good effort though! Keep it up.

Jorge Zagatto:

Perfect idea. Great animation!!! Gongratulations!!

Amelia Kurth:

It is a bit difficult to see the detail in your expressions with this lighting