Asylum
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Mike York:
This is really Good! and very creative I need to steal some of your creative juice :-)
Jerry Zigounakis:
This is phenomenal. The animation is clean and has nice curves. Great composition and camera angles. I know it's not part of the competition but you even took the extra time to texture
Taber Dunipace:
Heh nice BG and rendering to get the point across.
Julianne McCartney:
Hillarious!
Jason:
hilarious concept!!!!!! the lipsync seems a bit off with the main character. the action is a little awkward and poppy at parts. keep it up though!!
Tomas Jech:
interesting concept, though unclear and seems rushed.
Joe Garhan:
hey man good job I really like that
Matthew Simkins:
Nice interpretation. If you were to continue working on this I think you should add some detail to the character to make them look more 'insane.' Some twitches and involuntary movements to make it look like they don't have total control over themselves. At the moment they look a bit too calm and controlled.
Josh Doohen:
funny! great idea!
Elliott Gibson II:
nice idea but reminds me of the vantriquillist one...animation seems like it could use a little more exaggerations in pose to pose phase
good job nonetheless.
Ken Rice:
Pretty good animation - I would have tried to not show his mouth on the lines 'Mine too' as the character can't speak and laugh at the same time.
Elisa:
lol!
a nice 3 in one!
Mariano Villegas Gonzalez:
Great idea, but maybe one detail of the hands may help to understand the concept.
Justin Weg:
Haha cute idea
Luciano A. Muñoz Sessarego:
it is still a bit stiff
Frank G:
Can't say that I didn't feel a teensy bit disturbed by this interpretation.
The idea is great with the hand puppets.
We must remember that insanity is just the majority way of saying non-conformist.
The acting is great.
Adam Clark:
Ha! I love the staging and the idea. Animation is pretty good, it starts off with kind of an awkward pose though.
Christopher Salamat:
Very good idea. Could use a little more polishing.
Daniel Luke:
This is a truly original concept. Great job!
Simon:
Great idea.
Erik Westlund:
Wow, nice creepy gag. Big, fast camera/staging changes are distracting. Gag would read better from be if I didn't feel like I was being whipped around in the shot. Jerky movement are somewhat supported by the "spastic" nature of the character but could be made a little smoother and slightly more subtle. Similarly, laughter and facial expressions are not completely synchronized to audio, a little jerky instead of "spastic". Facial expressions and mouth movement are too even or symmetrical on left and right sides of character.
Paul Naas:
Nice concept!
Ceno:
congratulations!
Leon Gittens:
this is the most original idea i have seen yet great stuff, nice camera shots, watch that little pop on his left arm around 31-35
David Shum:
Thats funny xD
I didn't get the flashing light tho :(
But thats pretty cool :D
Helen Cranston:
Great idea there!
Senthilnathan D:
nice work.
Jason Smith:
Nice originality.
Juan Z.:
really great idea. i liked your take on the sound file. but needs some work
Cristina Eiko:
I loved the idea!
trish breslin:
great idea!!!
Chris Woods:
The fact that he's talking to his imaginary friends was hard to pick up on because of all the frantic energy in the performance.
Max Rodriguez:
Very funny idea, The foot is kind of distracting to see.
Michael Cawood:
The talking hands are a little awkward and could have used a little fore-warning so that the audience get's it faster, but otherwise I relly like this piece.
James Stevenson:
nice idea - creepin' me out a bit though, sinister stuff! Original approach - hats off to you for doing something different.
Aaron Clement:
Too much going on at once... the staging needs to be better.
James:
A bit confusing at times - nothing to do with the animation as such, more to do with the camera cuts and staging. Great idea though!









Animator: Amelia Kurth
Description: a patient talks to the voices in his head
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: evenings and weekends - 40ish hours