Mike York:

My best advice is to plan out your animation more.

Taber Dunipace:

The hit just isn't working for me. Needs some more detail on how he hits and lands.

Daniel Kaplan:

Too far away from the camera to see what actually happens.

Steve:

the actual animation is ok, but i just can't get the story, it's a little too confusing

Justin Weg:

It would be a good idea to frame this closer so we can see more of the character.

Radhika:

erm..a little confusing

Christopher Salamat:

Doesn't reely make sense. Can't see the acting well, camera needs to be closer.

Erik Westlund:

Having only one character in such a wide shot is not working. Character poses do not relate to the audio until frame 120. Before that I see no relationship to audio. Left foot is sliding on the ground from 145-210. Car lurching (forward? back?) is sudden and unexplained... anticipation is not readable. Character limbs collide with the ground after he is knocked down.

Chris:

... what? The plot of the animation was very hard to follow. Once he gets hit by the car it doesn't match the audio any longer. Plus, why is the character/action taking place so far in the background?

Max Rodriguez:

Kay Ma'Ani:

Whats the point of the car? if you could please explain.

Holly Brogaard:

The animation didn't really make sense.

Aaron Clement:

A little random at times... I didn't get the ending.