Spoil it

Final Rating: 6.07. Finished: 7 out of 85 entries.
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Animator: James Lane

Description: Don't you hate that guy?

Experience: about 11 months

Time taken: all month

Comments:

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Jason:

hahaha, nice poses/composition/timing

only thing is exaggerate them a bit more.

Tomas Jech:

Animation is technically pretty good. But the staging confuses the actions. I'm still not sure what happens at the end...

Taber Dunipace:

A bit too much motion going on for my tastes, but what's here is done very well. I love the attitude of the "jerk" guy too, very nice.

Ken Rice:

Good animation - however on first viewing I wasn't sure who the left chap hit at the end.

Joe Garhan:

really nice def my favorite so far! your acting is really nice the characters movement are very life like and its a good take on the dialog

Tyson Ibele:

Hehe...really nice job!

Virgil Tanasa:

pretty good! still could use a bit of tweaking on the right side dude,his arms go quite mad at the end of the animation. also i think some of the facial expressions are quite unclear in certain areas of the animation, see the girl for example (brows moving strangely ).
but overall, as i said, pretty good!

Mark Stoughton:

This is great!

Cassandra:

Nice audio, video correlation made.

Ümit Dönmez:

nice animation

Greg M. Johnson:

Nice secondary movement. Nice character development.

Ambuj:

this is good!!
Some suggestions: when third guy enters, his expression is neutral, i think it should be excited.
When hes saying "phil" he is looking at girl .. mm y??
And the laugh at the end could be pushed more. Good job!

Daniel Luke:

Wow! He really slapped her good, didn't he !?

Brilliant work!

Erik Westlund:

Nicely thought through. Many examples of this kind of idea but yours is one of the better examples. Movement of couple holding hands is very believable and has weight. Small overshoot of female holding hands on male is problematic. I think the center male character could have brought one hand up somewhat defensively in between him and annoying character. This would setup the slight push as he tries to get some 'space' back. Everyone's shoulders are a little too even. For a moment female character tilts (frame 53) but rights herself quickly... why? that was a nice change in her pose for that moment and would lead nicely into disgusted look and pose later (frame 90). Annoying character gestures after "slap" (280, 300 not as much, 340) work but the lead up to pose at the end is a little forced and awkward. Hand that gestures on "I" in "I got that" could continue up the head for embarrassment. Too many gestures in too small of a space.

Luke Sullivan:

Some over-exaggerated face and mouth shapes. Plus a couple of holds that are a little too static.

Jason Smith:

She has some great expressions/poses. Nice job.

Juan Z.:

well done funny

sharad kumar:

good animation!...but u missed the chuckle on the lady after she says "mine too".

Pablo Piccione:

Exclente Staging...I like it...Good lip sync..!

Alexandar Ivanchev:

in frame 277 Phil's arm goes behind the body and he looks like he lost his arm ... The pose would be much more appealing if the arm comes forward and even up so we can see his surprise... Great animation otherwise...

Gustavo Negroni:

I think the facial expressions, gestures and timing are really good overall. I specially liked how the slapping in the back/character's hand matched the sound and didn't feel forced. In the end though, I think the character on the right is making gestures that are way too fast for the time available to act + deliver the line, so I think I would've done something that gets the point across but is simpler/subtler. Good job.

Michael Cawood:

Rock solid stuff. Very nice.

Jorge Zagatto:

good!!

Amelia Kurth:

nice job!

I'm not sure about the pose on hand (1st guy from left) at 3:10 - is he pushing the other guys away?

Not sure that ou need the Big left arm move at 12:05 - also from that point on the elbow looks pinned and the body's moving hold appears to stop shortly after.

Aaron Clement:

Haha... nice man...very good... the second half was brillent. I don't know how you pulled that off... Great acting!

Rebecca D.:

Nice emotion and execution of the story!

Ron Price:

Nice clear posing throughout most of it. The double-arm move at the very end's kind of distracting...