Josh Doohen:

needs some stronger poses. good start though

Victor Wong:

Held pose in the middle is a bit too static; even eyeblinks would help maintain "life."

Jerome Heuze:

needs work on the lipsync

Christopher Salamat:

Characters need to be a little less stiff

HARISH:

need to check on the moving holds. also when one character is talking the other two are absolutely still. needs a lot of work to be done on this.

lucas:

feels stiff

Erik Westlund:

Poses should move through the entire character... character's center of gravity should shift between poses. Movement between poses then involves the entire pose for the entire character, not just the head and hands. The problem I see starts with your staging... the feet, ankles, knees, and hips are not adding anything to the 'story' here... so why are they in the shot? 'Green' character has some potential for communicating because the line-of-action changes, but the movement is stiff: start-stop-start-stop. Focus on your poses, and learn the value of creating flavor and arcs in movement between poses with breakdowns. Hand are not posed with interest but are more like flat pancakes.

Juan Z.:

work on it a bit more