He's Got Away Again

Final Rating: 3.96. Finished: 41 out of 85 entries.
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Animator: Oran Bar-Tal

Description: Once again Paul has got out of the mad house, and as usual, Paul and Pam are coming to get him back.

Experience: 3 months

Time taken: 1 week

Comments:

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Andrew Linke:

haha, this was very very funny, i like the style of the animation as well great work.

Jason:

funny,very funny. a little awkward at parts. like with the action and posing.

Taber Dunipace:

Try to make the cutouts work to your advantage and don't be afraid to draw new shapes when they can't quite do what you want them to.

Jerry Zigounakis:

Very funny.

Victor Wong:

For cutout animation, this works very nicely. Good storytelling and lip sync.

Stefano:

really funny idea

Uri Ashkenazi:

oran, it is nice!

James Parsons:

NIce idea and some nice characters. A bit jerky but otherwise nice.

HARISH:

more inbetweens are required. also the bodies are stiff. but Good effort

Henning Koczy:

Not half bad! Very clear... could've used some exaggerated full-body action on the laugh.

Erik Westlund:

Consistency of character design is valuable but I think the center "crazy" character should have a different type of nose. Poses are very static with too much similarity between right and left sides. Movements are abrupt and are not communicated with aniticipation... they just happen. Color contrast for straight jacket works but is hidden inside the silhouette of large male orderly. Line-of-action for center character mostly doesn't change throughout performance. Cute, funny, flip attitude in concept needs better execution in posing and movement.

Jason Smith:

Interesting, very interesting! Nice style.

Max Rodriguez:

nicely done.

James Stevenson:

Haha nice humour in this one, and I like the stylized approach. Good entry.

Aaron Clement:

I like the graphical nature... lacks personality, though.

Rebecca D.:

Lots of fun, nice extra flourishes.