Taber Dunipace:

Wow, so much stuff is happening that I'm completely distracted and can't follow the action. Though I must say that I like these characters and this setup.

Mike York:

Very Interesting :-) The acting choices feel a bit odd though

Jason:

weird, awkward action. (especially in the jump)

can't tell who's talking

Tomas Jech:

Don't make the characters fight for the spotlight. Make sure whoever is the focus of the scene at a given time is given all of the audience's attention.

Kathleencool:

One of the best I have ever seen in 11 second club. Very smooth.
I love it. This is the real deal. I can see your bright future. Keep up the great work.

Ken Rice:

Bizarre stuff - nice rigs - an awful lot of movement all happening at the same time - a little chaotic - fun to watch though.

Kent Wong:

haahha... very funny piece, very creative.

Amelia Kurth:

Wonderful models!

womans motion seems to be somewhat disconnected from the animal she is riding in the second half of the piece - especially watch the arm movements

Alex:

Every thing goes together beautifully! Good job man.

Maureen Seng:

The characters look a bit too busy, there's no actual focal point on who's talking.

Elliott Gibson II:

like the idea but it seems off sync

Emmanuel Vergne:

we don't understand who is speaking because everything is always moving at the same time

Greg M. Johnson:

Incredibly cool character selection and expression.

luc:

Like the concept, but floaty animation and no strong poses. Good job though.

Tim Nowak:

this was good but there was a lot of random movement that really wasnt necessary. The girl looked like she was swimming for a bit at the and and the guy was dancing like a ballerina rather than sharpening his knife. This was good but you need more work on the weight balence.

Brad Bradbury:

the characters are cool looking, and the walk cycle is sound. Thehumans are really wildly jumping all over the place. shoot for subtle gestures and find clear poses.

Erik Westlund:

I think I understand the setup for the gag, but there seems to be a lot of extra things going on that are unrelated to telling a story. The movement that causes the male character to be thrown from the beast is sudden and without explanation. Using the male character to justify the tapping sound with his feet isn't working. All the back and forth "dancing" with the blades is kind of weird and arbitrary. On top of it all, the allegatahiposaurus is not that yummy looking that I would assume anyone would want to eat it. That's the joke... right? Male and female characters appear well designed, modeled, and textured. The setups for all three must be pretty solid... but none of this has to do with the purpose of the competition.

Chris Woods:

Try and figure out where you want the audience to be looking, and make sure that your other characters are helping to direct the eye to ONE PLACE at a time.

Chris:

I think if you put this much effort into animating a single character it would've been much better. In animating all three characters I think you bit off more than you could chew.

Gill Frank:

to much happening at the same time, cant focus what to look at.

Rebecca D.:

Very, very clever interpretation of the transcript! Awesome animation and characters! Great lip synching too. You can tell a great amount of thought went into this one.