Mike York:

I wish I could see the other two character's :(

Jason:

the poses are nice, some of them are a bit awkward. but the action is great. keep workin!

Ken Rice:

It's a good effort but some poses look strange and I don't know why his right arm is always bent.
The laughing squat is a good pose.

Taber Dunipace:

Some mechanical issues going on here but nice despite them.

Elliott Gibson II:

I think it would have been cool to include some extra actors...poses need more work.... i wouldn't worry about rendering with motion blur just yet. nice job

John Olson:

that jump at the end made me laugh, extra star just for that.

Emmanuel Vergne:

i don't understand everything. Your poses are not always clear.

Greg M. Johnson:

Superb use of arcs. Some of them don't exactly contribute to the meaning of the scene.

Christopher Salamat:

Well for what you have, there's some popping going on and your poses need some work

Erik Westlund:

Pose feel very artificial. I can't imagine a conversation where these kinds of movements would happen as a result. Its like he suddenly has intestinal cramps. What is the little hop towards the end? What caused that? You have to justify these kinds of things. Why is your staging showing his feet? What are his feet adding to the story/performance. With all that empty space around the character its harder to justify not seeing the other characters. A medium shot or medium close-up would probably make seeing only one character justifiable so long as the character performance convinces us that the other people are present but out of the shot.

Magnus Yu:

Your end pose needs work but everything else is good. Good job!

Ron Price:

What's happening here? Is he holding a baby? The timing and mechanics seem nice and specific, but to what?

Aaron Clement:

This guy is funny... is he miming?