Mike York:

Seems a little floaty..

Taber Dunipace:

I love these acting choices but I feel the animation still lacks punch. Everything kind of floats from point to point.

Ken Rice:

Good effort - over all a little bit floaty.

Emmanuel:

The girl's hand pops at frame 87. Try fixing that one. And the eyes feel like they're staring at something else also.

Jerome Heuze:

I really like the composition, and the lipsync. There are some hand movements that needs some work. some of the emotions will need some work.

Radhika:

the woman need a little more life in her face..but otherwise decent

Adam Clark:

really squirmy actions, they look kinda sedated. Im not sure this is the simplest statement of the main idea of the scene.

Sunny Kharbanda:

The animation seems stiff compared to the level of energy in the dialog. It can be pushed at least twice as far as it is now. Try loosening up their spines more.. the woman on the right is pretty stiff, and the guy on the left can have much bigger poses!

Victor Wong:

More SI//SO's needed.

Richard Bannister:

Hi this is a good idea. I think you are showing some great things with the lady touching the guy in the middle's left shoulder each time she wants him to calm down.. that works really well.

What lets it down a bit for me is things still feel a little computery / watery. - For example where the guy puts both his hands on the table it would be good to add some more weight there and maybe have them stop fully down on the table.. the right hand does that but the fingers need to be down, currently they hover above it. I also think the lady slapping the table looks a little wrong maybe she could have clapped her hands together in a mocking way and that's why the eccentric guy gets a little grumpy at the end.

Good luck.

lucas:

something about it feels flat

Ceno:

i like the map

Juan Z.:

you have it but let me let you know that you want to focus the eye on one thing at a time so try and not have everything moving. but good job

Erik Westlund:

Bodies are stiff while the hands are constantly floating around. Laughter of character on left is only reflected in jaw movement, which seems artificial. No real change in attitude is reflected in the line-of-action for each character.

sharad kumar:

please chk the timing...animation seems to float !..keep it up!

Max Rodriguez:

Awkward poses for the guy on the left. Seems to transition very slowly.

Chris:

It feels like the characters are drifting from pose to pose as the program extrapolates the keys- especially in the hands.

Aaron Clement:

Composition isn't too bad... felt floaty... the timing was off, too.