Taber Dunipace:

Some stuff was zipping around so fast that I could hardly keep track of it. Overall this is a fine animation, especially for this difficult audio piece. Nice touch with the liquid but I completely missed it first time around because so much other stuff is going on.

Ken Rice:

Good effort here - however I think everything is a bit stiff. The empty glass on the left appears very heavy at times (IK looks on). And the left chap’s wrist looks very painful in that position at the end of the animation.

Christopher Salamat:

Face animation needs to be pushed.

HARISH:

The bodies look too stiff, Could work on that. ,..........but good effort.

Henning Koczy:

Awkward and puppetlike. I like the setup though.

Erik Westlund:

Characters posed in profile is removing a lot of "information" for the audience. Don't feel trapped by the 'logic' of where everyone and everything is... character don't have to turn directly towards one-another to address each other. Female character to arrive a little sooner. Finish is not clear regarding what is happening or how these characters relate to each other. I don't think you resolved this before beginning to set keys. Movement is popping/jerking around and needs a lot of polish. Very distracting. Staging on intimate location is a nice choice and has potential.

Ceno:

ahah hands

Juan Z.:

its a bit over animated. just work on that.

Jason Smith:

This piece has come far since the WIPs, great job.

Magnus Yu:

Overall body movements are good, it lacks facial expression make use of those eyebrows to express what they are thinking.

Pablo Piccione:

gOOD CHARACTERS. think they need more life...a little bit robotic?....keep doing!

Max Rodriguez:

Her presentation of the bottle is weird. Good job.

Aaron Clement:

A little muppetty at times... some good energy in there, though.