Simply Phil

Final Rating: 2.23. Finished: 77 out of 85 entries.
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Animator: Joanna

Description: I decide to concentrate on keeping the lipsync and gestures the focal point and keep the scene as simplistic as possible.

Experience: 2-3yrs at university

Time taken: Approximately 24hours

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Taber Dunipace:

Very stiff. Get the whole body into the gestures and make them natural.

Ken Rice:

Good effort -
You need stronger poses though. A bit floaty or jerky in places.

Victor Wong:

You could probably push the extreme poses a bit more.

Jerome Heuze:

Very nice lipsync, but i would work on the posture and hand movements. He is also too rigid.

Radhika:

movements are a bit rigid/restricted..but decent animation

kEViN:

loosen up those hips more. He's WAY too stiff. Act it out in front of a mirror a few times. It needs a better feel of weight and balance.

Erik Westlund:

The performance has virtually no energy. Character is like a fence post, ram-rod straight up and down for almost the entire performance. Study up on asymmetry in posing, silhouette value, contrast in posing, and the use of interesting negative shapes around character.

Vaggelis Gavalakis:

The animation is floating enough..There is not much life in the character...Need some tweaks..

Traci Plagmann:

You've got some nice lipsync and head gestures in there. Try to get more of the body involved in it though.

Chris:

His arms never going over his head. The posing could've been pushed a lot further.

Aaron Clement:

Too stiff... needs a lot of work... it's bad to look directly to the camera.