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Taber Dunipace:
Wow what a cool ZIP over to the other side of them! Great setup, great blocking, a little awkward on the camera.
Overall a very good job.
Kevin Scott:
nice s&s!
Will:
Would be higher but you didn't finish it
Jason:
push the poses and expressions a bit more. especially with the last sentence the guy says.
Lindsay Thompson:
Wish you would have finished it. Looking good so far.
Joe Garhan:
oh boy i wish this was finished! very well done the motion camera work and acting are outstanding
Josh Doohen:
super slick! great exaggeration and motion!
Elisa:
nice touch on the stretching of the green guy! Looked very natural and fun
Virgil Tanasa:
such a shame this isn't finished, one of my favorite pieces! great work. congratulations!
Victor Wong:
Excellent storytelling. Coulda used some more tweens, but all the poses are there.
Justin Weg:
Love the stretch on Brussells.... I think I know who did this one.
Luciano A. Muñoz Sessarego:
nice keyposes
Renato Fochi:
Really great poses and movement...i love it!
Maureen Seng:
Great potential, too bad its unfinished.. Lip sync on green guy could be better.
Daniel Luke:
This is great! The characters are really interacting with each other, and the slide that Greeny did across the stage was premium. It's a shame you didn't get to finish it completely.
Mike Paech:
Great work. Love the staging.
Yahya:
this wouldve been so good if all the inbetweening was done man
HARISH:
Would have looked good if at all you were able to complete it. but the timing seems to be great in the blocking too. will definitely look good after splining
Joseph Leung:
Nice, but I thought it would be better if the girl responded to the green guy when she spoke. Animation looks great in the beginning. The stepped poses look good in the end. Nice camera and staging. Suspiciously very good... ;-) Would have gave 9 stars if completely finished. 10 stars if the girl responded to the green guy.
Frank G:
This little green guy has some of the best gestures of the lot. So well contrasted to the movements of the couple. That reverse bent moon walk is masterful. The timing is comedic. Well done.
Ian John White:
finish it, looks nice so far, good direction aswell as nice animation
Dieter Wagner:
the beginning was great, just looks like you ran out of time to finish polishing the end.
Erik Westlund:
Nice setup in your staging! Fast moves of "annoying" character have nice contrast to the other more "typical" characters. Great looking "smear" as he zips in front of the other two. Problem is, they don't react. In fact the 'normal' characters are a little too monotonous. They work as a unit but the line-of-action needs to change at least a little for them... with a little squash and stretch in the space between them. Obviously still in blocking stage. I would like to see this one further along in the future.
Jason Smith:
Great squash and stretch, nice arcs and great interacting between the green dude and Phil. I really hope you finish this piece.
Juan Z.:
i love your poses. well done.
Vaggelis Gavalakis:
When the last seconds are finished up, this should be a great animation...
Pablo Piccione:
Yes, I kwno you couln't finish it. But is awsome!! Very Cartoony, I love it!..The move from one side off the screen to the other...EXCELENT...
Christiaan Moleman:
I think with the attitude change on Brussels at the end you could do more with the facial expression, the eyes particularly.
Alexandar Ivanchev:
Those poses are great... Good work.
Derek Mabson:
I would like to see this one finished.
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
Too bad you didn't polish the whole thing, the first part looked nice. I like the pushing the guy towards him, you managed weight really nicely.
Hopefully you'll finish the shot, I can be really nice.
Cliff:
I really liked this one. I really liked the camera move you do at the end. You might be stretching him just a little to much just before he says 'where are we going' and i wish you would have finished it completly but it looks really well done.
Max Rodriguez:
good staging.
Michael Cawood:
This could be amazing when it's finished. Very nice poses and staging.
Tim mccourt:
shame it's not finished
James Stevenson:
shaping up nicely - well worth finishing properly imo.









Animator: Jeff Kim
Description: The first half is splined, the second half is still blocked. I plan to finish the entire piece later, but right now I would like to use this opportunity for some valuable feedback!
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 30 hours