The escape

Final Rating: 5.46. Finished: 14 out of 85 entries.
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Animator: Jomar Ravalo

Description: What can say? Three is a crowd!

Experience: Series animation 5-6 years. 3d animation 1 year.

Time taken: approximately 56 hours.

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James Lane:

love the snappy movements great job!

Ken Rice:

Nice style

Taber Dunipace:

This is the best animation of this type I've seen on this site. GOOD use of body language and gestures to sell these cutout shapes. I could've used a little more specific acting choices, but this is definitly strong overall. Nice.

Tomas Jech:

lol.

J.Kim:

Wow!
Characters are so cute and I like your story! nice work! :)

Kent Wong:

Very cute and creative. Nice animation timing too.

Levi:

i like the concept. Ending is a bit abrupt. (But i know its suppossed to be within the time limit)

Ricardo Vicens:

great scenario. The animation could use a more polish. I also like the timing and appeal of the characters.

Christopher Salamat:

Nice style. I think the character on the right could use a little more work, especially during his laugh. Needs to be a little more believable even though he may be faking it

Daniel Luke:

Solid concept. Solid animation. Solid shove from the cart. I love it!

Henning Koczy:

Could've used some more exaggeration on the laugh. Excellent though.

Ceno:

Good!
i make me laugh

Erik Westlund:

Wow, moving backgrounds and everything. Who is making the cart move forward? I think you could have built the same gag into the audio a little bit more tightly. There is a single, sharp slap sound before the last line "Oh... I got that." If he had been shoved off before the last line, his reaction would matched your story concept. Male on front of cart is pretty aloof... does he have less feelings for the girl than she does for him? Nice use of squash and stretch.

Jason Smith:

I love the bounce at the end when the guy gets pushed off the rail car.

Juan Z.:

really cool. i liked it alot keep it up

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Very nice setup, cool character designs and nice moves. Although they don't move much you've got some nice flexibility going on. I do miss some more acting on the characters, maybe it's because they have no eyebrow, but they seem to be always smiling, even when the guy is pushed off he's still smiling.

Still, a solid 2D piece, nice job.

Max Rodriguez:

hahaha, very funny ending. her hair is distracting. but the rest of the anim is pretty clean.

RJay Bengelink:

Nice simple 2d work. I love the push at the end.

Aaron Clement:

I liked the pat on the head... not sure about the push off at the end, though...

Ron Price:

Cute design and execution. The fall at the end is getting lost a bit for me...