Taber Dunipace:

Try to get the body more involved in the action. Just having the mouths and faces tell the story makes the characters seem frozen and puppet-like.

Ken Rice:

Good effort - but the tempo and gestues seem very even throughout your animation and I don't think you have any strong poses. You also think Phil is the pink character at the start.

Alexandar Ivanchev:

Good work. I think that both of the characters could move more in the torso area, especially the pink character . It would add more flexibility to the overall look of the poses. One other thing I noticed is that when the pink character lifts her leg the weight doesn't look right. I think it would help if you transfer the weight toward the other leg.

Christopher Salamat:

Not very interesting, lifeless animation. Poses need to be stronger. Make sure you your characters are "thinking" so it doesn't look like they're staring off into space and just going from sentence to sentence.

lucas:

not a lot of flow in motion. lip sync seems off

Erik Westlund:

Poses are largely the same throughout with very little change in the performances. Some head movement and arms/hands waving around by hips, spines, torsos, etc. staying put. Female character lifts foot but weight does not shift. Eye darts/movement does not give indication for location of off screen character, so setup lacks believability.

Juan Z.:

need work but not too bad

sharad kumar:

please make the body move a bit...characters are plainly speaking the dialouge...follow line of action.....begin with taking up 2 or 3 second scenes...keep working hard.

Jason Smith:

I don't understand the stroller... ?