Third wheel
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Mike York:
I like your style choice of your characters. There are some really good acting choices going on in here. Frame 289 is great!
I think it still needs some work though some of your movements felt a little to jumpy as if they are stuck in the step key mode still.....
Taber Dunipace:
Nice personality acting! Could be a bit smoother and more natural in the animation, but I love these characters!
Ken Rice:
Really nice, I laughed out loud at this work. Timing is good and I like all the little details. Only thing is I'm not sure what motivates the middle chap to be angry at the end (mood changes quickly)?
Tomas Jech:
The actions are immensely fast and hard to follow.
Nicolás Cantarelli:
great timming!
Mariano Villegas Gonzalez:
Excelent work. The acting and details are really natural.
Good Job !!!
Elisa:
the scene looks very natural and the characters move are smooth :)
Kent Wong:
very funny and nice style.
Jason Smith:
Nice job, I'm pretty sure we've been in the situation before....
Jeranimo:
Really cool stuff. Though, I'm not sure why the boyfriend gets mad at the nerd guy.
Ümit Dönmez:
some hand movements are too fast...
Greg M. Johnson:
Nice choice of characters.
Frank G:
That pose of the guy reclining on the couch had me hooked at the opening.
The aggressive reaction from Phil didn't seem to have a strong stimulus until I slowed down the action to frame-by-frame.
This would be my favourite 3D interpretation.
andyM:
some nice poses and ideas
most of the moves were too harsh though,or slightly off time.
Tim Nowak:
nice animation. Good weights.
Sunny Kharbanda:
I like how it starts, with a clear role definition for the characters. I felt that the reaction at the end from Phil was too strong, as the other guy didn't do anything drastic while laughing to provoke it (like intruding too much into the couple's space)
Ceno:
this is cool
Luke Sullivan:
Moving holds would help a lot
Senthilnathan D:
nice work
Michael Vandenhoven:
Perhaps a little on the rushed side,
Juan Z.:
nice
Erik Westlund:
Starts off very strong but then falls into way too much busy movement later on. Nice gesture of female adjusting hair with hand then placing hand over other hand (around 76-107). Then all of a sudden she is spastic in her clapping and body language. Dorky character waving hands up and down is over-the-top. Conclusion of hostility isn't supported by the setup. We should outlaw the double pointing finger gesture.
alejandro calonge:
The best. It has a good render, good illumination, and the animation tempo is awesome. It has some perfect little details that you have to check em out deeply to realize they are there. Great job!.
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
Good job! I like the style, the characterization if the rig is very nice. I also like the snappy tone of the animation.
I do find a little too much pose-to-pose move, I'd add a little more follow-through and some more moving holds to it.
Also I find the staging to be a little far, moving the camera a bit towards them might work better for the performance.
Good job!
Gustavo Negroni:
I think the staging, timing and gestures are dead on. Nothing seemed forced, specially towards the end where it's pretty busy sound-wise. Good poses for the end.
Chris Woods:
Too much action. Find just the most important words and build up to them instead of being super-energetic all the way through.
Eric Suen:
I think it would help much mroe if you make it as a close up shot. The animation can be more subtle. The beats and rhythm is very flat and linear. Making some of the gestures. Nice work!
Aaron Clement:
The beging was good... the rest was overcooked.









Animator: Federico Abib
Description: Two lovers and a misplaced.
Experience: 3 years
Time taken: More than I thought, but I don't really know