Grooshenka:

Funny story, awesome characters and great acting! It feels like the guy is competing with the girl for viewers' attention, though. Maybe he should've stopped pressing the button a bit sooner to let the viewers focus on the girl's emotions.

Erin Goddard:

ambitious trying to animate 3 characters at once! next time you may want to try cutting to different camera angles to focus close up on one character at a time. it will save you some work and you won't have to worry about the 3rd character sitting so still the whole time. I like your story concept though, and the drama of the woman hanging over the chair reads nicely!

Nicholas Green:

haha the guy trying to get someones attention to shut her up!
this is one of my favorites so far.