Lauren Kimball:

I like the staging, but there are a lot of floating gestures. Try animating with stepped curves first and then spline them last. If you begin with strong poses and then clean them up one section at a time you can be more intentional with the performance, better plan the timing, and control the cushioning to avoid that floating feeling.

Luis Aldon:

Funny, the animation feels a little quick... Maybe I’m old but it was a bit snappy