Final Rating: 5.80. Finished 25 out of 96 entries.

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Animator: Suraj kumar

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Experience: 2 Years

Time taken: 6 days

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Dieguito Pritchett:

Interesting concept. Original idea. Way to think outside the box, no pun intended. My suggestion would be to tighten up the shot and maybe do some camera cuts. It'll help with the gag. For example, have a close enough shot on the first guy where the audience can see that he's in a laundry mat with a tad bit of visibility on whats in the dryer. That way at the end, the final lines allow a wide angle shot on everything revealing the gag of a person in there. :) Hope this helps!

Marten Visser:

Haha funny idea.

Richard Adams:

LOL. Love the idea! That woman in the dryer..lol

Marckus Duverger:

Hm, well animated. I'm just not entirely sure what the context of the scene it

Peter Conolly:

I liked the direction and set up for this short! I feel that this animation would have been better if the bald character had been addressing the negligent parent the entire time instead of appearing to be addressing an unknown presence off screen.

Ryan Hill:

Interesting story idea. Don't forget to lift the heel up first when re-positioning the foot or taking a step(see frames 21, 214, & 219).

Samuel Couffe:

I liked your shot ! Just wonder if it would be great or not to add something on the "humm". I think the sound clearly implies a mouvement, but it is your shot and you decide ! Keep going animating ! :)