Final Rating: 6.81. Finished 9 out of 96 entries.

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Animator: Sarathbabu A S

Description: Tom is a messenger. from HEAVEN, his job is protect peoples, and motivate people for healthy life.

Experience: 6

Time taken: around 2 weeks after office time

Comments:

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Dieguito Pritchett:

very good animation! you can definitely feel the weight

Michael Ayers Jr:

It needs more work on the anticipation where Mr. Buttons snatches the cigarette and runs from the second character out of the scene.

Christopher Scott:

Little too many hand gestures and there should be some clue of the rhythmic pounding

Richard Adams:

The animation itself, quite well done, especially the secondary actions. Where it falls down is the idea, which doesn't make sense in the context of the dialog and pounding sound.

pmldz:

love how the cat is animated, especially when he slides down and his tail right after

Marckus Duverger:

The way they play off of each other is really nice, especially with the cigarette

Howard Cameron:

The animation is excellent, but I the staging seems a bit out of place. It reminds me of Rodger Rabbit and the detective. But it's not clear.

Jereline Vasquez:

I don't see how the visuals apply to the dialogue but it's good animation at least.

Eleftherios Kokkinakis:

Looks great! Too many poses on the orange fella though. It reminds me of Stan from monkey island if you know. Although you seem to have a good skill on your curves there are parts that you have very linear almost robotic animation. For Example the part where he is getting the cigarete back and the moving parts of the orange fella's waist.