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An unexpectad table

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Final Rating: 3.59. Finished 100 out of 136 entries.

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Animator:

Description: A couple is talking in a restaurant and the girl is uncomfortable with the no glass table.

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 7 days

Comments:

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Heather Richmond:

Upper body movements seem disconnected with the lower body.

Matheus:

Looks pretty good. One thing that sticks out to me is your timing. For example, the girl lifts her hand up as soon as the waiter is walking in front of the camera. The hand gesture got lost and I felt like she just "jumped" with the hand, feeling a bit lost myself on what exactly was happening.

In addition, I feel like her reactions are sluggish. Maybe try holding a pose? Keep up the great work, I love the setting!