Final Rating: 5.48. Finished 44 out of 231 entries.

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Animator: Own Muhammad

Description: talking to a friend......

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 15 days

Comments:

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Eric Raffle:

good animating except for the last frames needed more motion instead of a longer still frame

Adrian Winchell:

I was NOT expecting that severe of an attack for the meat products! Something more subtle might better match the rest of the scene. Because after "pork" you have no way to intensify the acting any further - that's it, that's as strong as it gets.

S J Bennett:

Good animation, acting is quiet then WHOA now he's in my face without any build up at all.

Léo Miche:

Cool. The character is a bit too much in the top of the frame at the end. You should pan up a bit.
The character moves too much to the camera before "pork". He should move more step by step during the whole shot.

Sean Bitara Dela Torre:

Nice!

Lucas Donaldson:

His eyes move around so it feels like their target of what he's looking at is moving. Overall though, really nice.