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Animator: Connor Leuck

Description: A vendor tries to sell to a vegetarian.

Experience: student

Time taken: 18 days

Comments:

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Alexander Shuaibu:

needs a lil bit more work (materials and background)... the man was perfect for the voice tho

AR Bullock:

I like the characters and the setting you used--just having the hot dog cart there adds to the narrative of the audio. And the kid's attitude is great! Even though he's smaller he seems kind of in charge of the scene. I feel like some of the poses could have used a little more ease-in or smoothing, like the chin-stroke around 170 frames or when the old guy leans back into his final pose

Alice Reeve:

Good poses. Be careful not to make their movements too jerky.

Adrian Winchell:

I think you could make the poses a little more fluid on here, but it gets the job done. Focus on the hands too - a lot of time here, they seem very minimally animated - just a few rigid poses.

Lucas Donaldson:

I like the way the adult pulls back upon hearing the kids a vegetarian.

Sabrina Winkel:

I like the idea of the story but the boy doesn't blink much