Final Rating: 5.29. Finished 51 out of 231 entries.

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Animator: Aldric

Description: A sheperd ask one of his sheeps to share a hamburger he has for lunch, but this starts a big discusion

Experience: Less than a year

Time taken: 2 weeks more or less

Comments:

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Vanni Alessio De Pieri:

the rendered visuals look nice, but has little movement

Adrian Winchell:

Start it with the shepherd's hand out, and have the first action be the sheep recoiling, otherwise it throws the first line of dialog the wrong way.

Richard Adams:

Very good animation overall. Problem is the idea doesn't quite work. Why would he be surprised that a sheep is a vegetarian? All sheep are vegetarians. The other way around would've worked better, especially if the sheep thought he was going to be dinner.

Léo Miche:

Cool lighting and render. Maybe you could push your poses a little more.

Shamel Esmaeil:

nice rendering! but the camera cuts are a little weird

Clara Cornish:

Nice movements but maybe try pushing the facial expressions a bit (e.g his face would probably scrunch up a bit more as he tries to compute the lack of meat.) a nice start though. :)