Adrian Winchell:

I'd prefer to see this without the thought balloon, as it takes away from the animation. The motions are a little wooden, except for the weird squishy-head thing on the carnivore at the beginning. His point could use some body language to go with it as well.

Richard Adams:

Aspects of this are really good, others not so much. The finger-pointing doesn't work for me. A "what?" gesture with both hands would've been much better.

S J Bennett:

Love the move at the end. :)

Léo Miche:

The characters should be the important thing in your scene.

Lucas Donaldson:

nice squash and stretch

Kendra Kaye Coffey:

Movements are over done in some places and under fine and stiff in others.