Alon Sharabi:

clever :)

Adrian Winchell:

I'd rather have seen you spend more time animating the characters than making a fully polished/finished cartoon with colors and backgrounds. Your characters are hardly animating aside from the lipsync/eyes. I'd love to see more bodily animation here, and maybe different angles?

Lucas Donaldson:

lip sync feels a little off. other than that, it has a cute appeal for its style.