Final Rating: 5.30. Finished 38 out of 206 entries.

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Animator: Silvia Martelossi

Description: Wise fish explaining to his little fellow their existence and that of their neighbours.

Experience: half an year

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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James Trimm:

That fish is pretty cool:) Chuck in some bigger mouth poses in there to make him even more eccentric?

Caesar Naranjo:

I think the idea is better than the animation

Timmy Kwee:

cool idea!

Brent Forrest:

ooooh... verry good, very clever take! I like the way you think and I like your flash animation! 9 stars

Joyce Makker:

Great story!

Meme Candia:

buena idea!

Sandra Tapia:

Very nice concept!

ben malberg:

Nicely illustrated! I like your character design as well, and the intro as great. Around f155 the talking fish is so flat on the bottom, it looks more like a bus than a fish in water because it's only traveling on a flat plane. Some vertical movement I think would help sell the believability that it's water. (like what you did with the small fish) The ending is good too, but the breathing on the sitting animal looks too flash like.