Final Rating: 5.22. Finished 41 out of 206 entries.

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Animator: laxmidhar sahoo

Description: Thanks to Norman Rig

Experience: 5 years

Time taken: 3 days

Comments:

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Ben Hopper:

Nice body motion, but I felt there was one hand gesture too many at the beginning, and then hardly anything else happens the rest of the way. The acting is good though.

Liang Wen Zhong:

I think your camera angle can zoom in a little bit , use Medium Shot (cinematography) ,we can see your detail.

Pamela Rivera:

I really love the acting. Maybe when he exhales, the mouth could be a little bit exaggerated for it. Also allow the shoulders go form an inhale position to an exhale position.

David Krein:

Like the pose choices with the exception of the extra hand chop on 'dimension,' felt a bit redundant after the others before it. Like the settle-in for the exhale as well.

Steve Schwartz:

It's good. No one can say it isn't but the acting gets super underwhelming around frame 180. He still feels alive, but super boring. Maybe pull in closer or give him some little secondary action while he's talking? Even something as little as an itch can make it more interesting than a talking head.

Joyce Makker:

Really good, I wish this was framed better, because it's too far away. I wish I could see more of his performance up close.

Sandra Tapia:

Nice job! I think that it needs a little more motion movement.

Brent Forrest:

Not the most exciting choices but the acting and animation are rock solid. 8 stars and a great big personal thumbs up

MartyB:

Nice work, would recommend that you be closer on your character because you have alot of dead space for nothing and also fix the eyes, he seems cross eyed on some parts

Ejen Shafiq Isa:

fluid animation but theres not much happening here, maybe introduce something to intrigue the audience like magically taking out something from the monitor