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The Alien with the Stash

by Sara Babbitt

Final Rating: 3.87. Finished 113 out of 206 entries.

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Animator: Sara Babbitt

Description: An alien offers his advice.

Experience: ~1 year

Time taken: 1-2 weeks on and off

Comments:

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James Trimm:

some really nice follow through blocked out there!

Steve Schwartz:

Looking really good. Would have liked to see more inbetweens at the end of each phrase.

Sarah Johnson:

Good start. Could use more acting and action happening during the dialogue pauses.

Jess Giaquinto:

Practice moving holds/subtle movements so that the character isn't completely motionless between pieces of dialogue. You may also want to consider drawing the rest of the figure through the waist/knees, so that we can understand what action he's doing that moves his location onscreen so much.

ben malberg:

You know from f0-f65 it's pretty good, but then I feel it's lacking a lot of in-betweens. I like the alien concept though, and the hand gestures. I might try thinking of another way to use my hand gestures other then the literal expression of the dialogue. (ex: pointing to himself when he says 'us') Nice drawing skills though.

Brent Forrest:

You need way more breakdowns dude 4.

Sandra Tapia:

Very rich on body poses and facial expressions. Love it!