Final Rating: 3.04. Finished 163 out of 206 entries.

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Animator: Kristian

Description: Before heading back in for the night shift Dave takes a moment to philosophise in the twilight. Also, he may have had a liquid lunch. This is my first ever character animation.

Experience: Four weeks.

Time taken: Three weeks sporadically. Learn by doing, eh?

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Ben Hopper:

Animation's not even close unfortunately. Watch yourself performing the dialogue, and put those subtleties in the animation.

Mervyn Le MandarinOrange:

left elbow snappy action and cant seems to see the mouth movement.

MartyB:

Alot of pops to fix

Sandra Tapia:

Very nice render and good idea. I think that hands are moving a lot, you could probably pause them in some moments, or not moving them together.

Tobias Fuhr:

46-63frame, his right elbow and left hand are weird. i think you have a lot of isolated movements, and maybe if you keep these movements inside som pose would be better. Just my opinion