Final Rating: 2.61. Finished 187 out of 206 entries.

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Animator: Tony Godden

Description: 2nd ever submission, went for a guy who's seeing things going on around the camera... or is he?....

Would love to hear any and all feedback, more I get the more I'll know how to improve.

Thanks.

Experience: Around 2 years, self taught.

Time taken: 11 days, few hours each day when I had time.

Comments:

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Mike Calhoun:

Mouth movements aren't really in sync by the end.

Sandra Tapia:

Nice job!

Corey Aaron Burkes:

A little too lifeless. I know the dialog is rather 'still'; I think the animation could have projected more... 'animation'. Good effort all the same, though.

Ruth Agada:

I think it would be good to first act out the animation so you would have a great understanding of poses. Keep going! :)