Final Rating: 5.54. Finished 27 out of 206 entries.

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Animator: John Kennedy

Description: Guy at a bar trying to impress the bar staff.

Experience: 5 years

Time taken: About 40 hours

Comments:

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David Krein:

Nicely done in general, some arcs feel like they could be stronger, and a lot of the poses hit pretty hard, but the progression and poses are fun. Especially the hand out, and the wipe of the table.

Brent Forrest:

Not bad acting!

Jez:

a simple concept but interesting animation, seems natural, i like it

James Trimm:

Great movement and overlapping, but more follow throught/ continuation needed at end/beginning of pose changes

Joyce Makker:

Very well animated. His motions lack motivation, but they're good nonetheless.

Davit Martirosyan:

Nice!

Paula Decanini:

I like the lean back a lot because it breaks up the motion, but it doesn't make sense if he's only going to lean in again 3 seconds later. Try to edit the poses and simplify somewhere. Nice work!

MartyB:

Great work

Ejen Shafiq Isa:

nice work. maybe the expression could be explored more i think. hazy eyes, disgruntled look maybe

Corey Aaron Burkes:

I like a good animation that uses the little sounds included to its advantage.

ben malberg:

This is really nice. Good acting, poses and smooth animation. My favorite part is the pause around f193, and the subtle change in facial expression. It came off as a confident character to me. The secondary movement of the cigarette around f230 was a nice touch! The only thing I can see is I think this piece needs more polish. Some pieces of the body look frozen once the pose is hit. It takes away from the realism. Anyway this is really good.