Final Rating: 5.89. Finished 13 out of 206 entries.

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Animator: Patrick Blazin

Description: A humanoid from another dimension is teaching his pupil about the universe.

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: 4 weeks

Comments:

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Brent Forrest:

I like your choices. One of the more engaging entries.

Oskar:

very nice!!!
cool acting choices, secondary character needs more subtle motions just to give him more life.

Paula Decanini:

There's some good stuff here. I get the emotion on the speakers face, and I like that you used tried out camera animation, though probably more than you needed. Overall, the body mechanics animation need more work.

Yuri Marcel Vieira:

Good one! Nice touch of the student character drawing while in class, we can all relate to that hehe

Steve Schwartz:

around 160, his hand goes through his leg. It's a nice piece but that lost points. I would also tone down the stuff he does with his hands, but only a little. Right now they feel kinda fidgety.

Timmy Kwee:

nice animation but too many camera cut

Steve Kimbrey:

The movement you have is really nice and smooth but I feel like sometimes the arms a moving a bit independently of the rest of the body.

David Krein:

I really liked the motion, the one thing that made it difficult to rate it really high was the second shot, his hand motions are wonderful but the poses feel like they are awkward compared to all the others, especially after the strong walking in the previous cut. Plus minor detail, his hand goes through his leg in the same scene. Great work otherwise, love the scene and concept.

ratna:

nice one :)

Sandra Tapia:

I like the facial expressions. Very cool idea.

Davit Martirosyan:

Very nice work, except camera cut, it's destroy animation