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Struggle of the Sleepy Student

by Megan E. Dunn

Final Rating: 3.66. Finished 128 out of 206 entries.

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Animator: Megan E. Dunn

Description: A teacher attempts to explain the finer points of the M-Brane Theory to a sleepy student.

Experience: 2 years?

Time taken: 1 week

Comments:

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Tobias Fuhr:

in the end the sleepy guy don't need hold his head, maybe wil be better. and i like the timing. i missed better poses

Brent Forrest:

Kind of dull

Paul D. Cooke:

Needs more movement and more expression

Sandra Tapia:

Very good job! I see a lot of improvement since you first posted the animation on "Wip forum." "are dimension as eternity" I would probably have showed the us circle with the stick.

Michael O'Brien:

I like that you've taken a different approach to this sound byte than others and I think you can take it even further. Maybe have the teacher fight for the pupil's attention more. You can especially make use of that last little tap noise at the end by having the teacher rap his pointer against the board or the student's desk.