Final Rating: 3.17. Finished 154 out of 206 entries.

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Animator: Nicholas Steeves

Description: Supervisor taking his station a bit too serious.

Experience: 1-2 years

Time taken: 2 hours a night and weekends

Comments:

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ben malberg:

The setup of the shot looks nice, and the character demands my attention. I think the first thing I would do is check my spacing of the movements because everything looks a bit floaty and even. (like a computer) Performance wise, if that dough is going to stay in the air for that long, you definitely need a bigger anticipation before the throw. I don't know your workflow but I would probably stay in blocking longer and work out my spacing of the movements before going into spline. It was a clever idea of sphere and circle.

Brent Forrest:

Would have been great if youd spent a little more time and care on the speed and motion of the dough and plate. Floaty stuff. 5/10

Benjamin Osei Boateng:

weldone... could have been a little more snappy though

Tobias Fuhr:

i like it. be careful to point all the time and it looks you are afraid to move to character, because it makes short movements.

Danielle Smith:

Perhaps needs a bit more focus on the weight of everything? Feels a bit floaty.