Final Rating: 4.07. Finished 112 out of 200 entries.

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Animator: Picon Pierre

Description: It's my first participation in this awesome contest, and my first time with high-polys models...

Experience: None. I'm a french student in a videogame school.

Time taken: Approximately 15 hours

Comments:

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Sarah Dunn:

I'm not very sure about the camera angle at the beginning. I do like the reveal.

Valentious Williams:

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Marshall Hallam:

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April Slocombe:

Head movements seem excessive at first but the lip sync is consistent.

Tadeusz Ciborowski:

Not sure why he is strapped to a rocket? I think you should just frame a nice shot instead of trying to do camera work too. If you insist on doing camera work I would suggest you read up more on it. The transition you use between cuts is not necessary and very confusing.

Mihai-Adrian Chirieac:

Nice story! But, when the full scene is revealed, the guy on the right seems to unnecessarily rotate its head. I think it would be better if he would start smiling right away after the full scene is revealed and emphasizing that pose (a moving hold maybe) instead of having him moving its head so much.