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Adequatulently Creepy

by Luke Morin

Final Rating: 3.55. Finished 153 out of 200 entries.

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Animator: Luke Morin

Description: Ben catches up with an old friend.

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: 3 days

Comments:

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Vardan Galstyan:

Too many hand move!

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creepy!

Lee:

Nice hand gestures, especially for the second guy! My only comment would be to clean up the render. The lighting is messed up on the second guy. This of course isn't an animation issue- just something to take a note of for next time.

Tadeusz Ciborowski:

I like the first dude you see, even tho he needs more work.. I can sense what the idea was for the guys body language but its not coming through to the screen due to more exploration and understanding of making good poses and better timing. The eyes are dead which is the first thing you look at. The other character is a different style which is really confusing and throws me off. He looks like he is from another movie. Since its not part of the "setup" I would suggest you keep characters in the same "Style"

April Slocombe:

Lighting is inconsistent but the animation itself is fine.