Joseph Leung:

I had a really hard time believing this animation because the strong adult male voices did not match these young boys.

Jeffrey Dekker:

cool.

Ken Rice:

Pretty good animation - however I wasn't keen on the gesture for 'espionage and murder'

Ryan Lowe:

could use better acting choices. the idea/setting are great and original however. good sycnh on the sound as well.

Mariah:

I love that they have little movements of their own while the other is talking! Very cute idea, and very good animation!

Ambuj:

Great!

Russell:

Watch out for volume in your characters. At several points, the volume changes on the characters and this detracts heavily from the movement.

Use your moving holds carefully. When Short Guy says "while we canl", he has a hold that doesn't accentuate an action. It pulls away from the weight of the movement.

Nice work!

Slobodan Danilovic:

really good key poses, nice weight, lacks some inbetweens for a really fluent movement.

Michel Giguère:

Stong drawing, and nice poses. Movements are very smooth, the taller guy standing up is well done. You could have exagerated your poses a little, but your choices work fine, excellent job.

Taber Dunipace:

Acting choices and animation quality are bringing this piece down. They don't seem to move like real people do. Try to pose your characters a bit more naturally; film yourself for reference.

Leon Gittens:

ha ha nicely done

Erik Westlund:

The piggy bank falling and breaking seems disconnected from the rest of the sequence. Great volume control throughout. Screen left character seems to glide through pose on, "Wit WHAT?!... " (frame 349) without much hit on the word "WHAT". I can deduce what is happening in the end (object thrown on floor) but I have to think about what it is and how it relates. The main problem I have is with how you setup this scenario... it seems to be clear to you but something audience has to figure out. At least with this audience member.

Ezra Allen:

Too much action, nicely animated, but your overloading your audience.

Romain Digonnet:

Good Idea.
"the espionage and murder" part doesn't feel right.
Maybe a little stiff.

Nolan:

I really like this. Your drawings are clean and poses are pretty natural. The only thing I would change is when the boy on the left makes the quotation signs, I think you could of chosen a stronger acting choice but thats just nit picking.

doc:

wow, you work fast

sushant:

good poses, need to work on the energy release..

Senthilnathan D:

hi ,this is nice work....

jonas bech:

the story is god but the characters dosent fit

sean connolly:

i like the facial expressions on the left kid. some of his gestures are difficult to read. i'm not sure if they quite match the dialogue.