Too Deep...Too Fast

Final Rating: 6.63. Finished: 3 out of 119 entries.
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Animator: Sean Coleman

Description: These guys are in too deep, too fast...

Experience: Recent Graduate

Time taken: 10 days

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Koty Juliano:

nice squash and stretch, don't like his head facing away in the start when the blue guy talks

Jeffrey Dekker:

awesome clip!! great job this month.

Scott Douglas:

Really nice!

Gregory Marlow:

Maybe a little too squashy stretchy. But looks pretty good overall.

Erik Westlund:

Lots of great energy. After seeing this many times I realize the build-up and release of energy is not completely consistent. "..great" on left character and "All the more reason..." from screen right are lacking the same energy so present in everything else. A minor point since it is a balancing act. Nice use of line of action in posing. Strong anticipations into large moves. Great staging and intensity on final pose. Easily top ten in my book.

Paulo Cesar Biajante:

good poses man!

Jean-Luc Delhougne:

Some really nice overlapping and squash & stretch here, those are just maybe a bit too exagerated. Really nice and dynamic motions overall.

Mike DeGar:

I think you could have given the blue guys a mnre exagerated respone for the "Oh ya, great." line. BUt other then that, this is great! keep up the good work.

Virgil Tanasa:

good one! one minor critique would be that you could perhaps make the purple character more receptive to the "now that we're accessories to.." line. it now seems a bit forced, like he's jumping into his reply and pose (facial expression too). perhaps having him turn his head slightly sooner and so being more attentive a fraction earlier would have helped.
as i said, nice one, i really like it!

Ryan Lowe:

AWESOME. great visualization of teh voices in the dial! AWESOME.

Taber Dunipace:

Every hit is so sharp that I feel like my eyes are getting jerked around. I do like the feel of the SUPER strong accents to the words, but I think you need to tone down most of them so that the really strong ones feel more unique.

wei keong:

Good timing and poses!

Michel Giguère:

Some really nice poses. The purple guy is entertaining, good acting with the phone. Nice end pose with the blue guy, but just a couple floaty moments on "Oh yeah, great". Pretty clear layout,
great work!

Naweed Khan:

I like the squash and streatch on this one.

Ceno:

muito bom mesmo!

Joseph Leung:

I really liked this piece. I thought the characters' had good acting and poses/body language. The one thing was the way you staged these characters and having only one camera view. I felt like it took away from the animation because there was a little too much backside. Perhaps adding some different camera views or close ups and having a little less back towards the camera, would add to this piece. Nice job!

Joe Garhan:

really nice animation so far my fav.

Rusty Gray:

Awesome! very solid, I especially like the final pose of the blue guy. I really feel that one character is extremely stressed out and the other is searching in vain for an answer. Keep up the great work!

James O'Neill:

There seems to be a bit too much squash on the characters head at times. I also want to see more of the second character earlier, maybe have him turning toward the camera on the first sentence of dialogue. I feel I am waiting for him to get into the shot.

Marco Palmieri:

last expression is over the top! the rest is good. good secondary motions and overlap. not bad

yoozco:

one of the best this month, lips-sync very good, hands movement nice too. good acting (very rare this month)!

Daniel Harris:

Heyhey! Great style man! I would have turned the purple guys head towards the blue guys later (maybe as an accent on "Deal") so that you don't see as much of the back of his head. I think his turn on "authorities" is a little OTT considering the strength of the reading too. Your other accents are really well placed though, nice work!! One of my favourites!

lizzie:

thats really nice and not over acted.

Lisa Taylor:

Your facial work is really nice. Well done

Nolan:

I think your poses look great, and your timing is also really good. I would tone down the squash and stretch on the head, I think it's a little distracting, besides that great work.

Romain Digonnet:

Great animation.
I like the hehe movement with the head at the begining, I night have aplified it just a notch..

RJay Bengelink:

Best I have seen yet. love the last frame.

Jonathan Mitchell:

i like this..shot is interesting and its got some good action. I like the snappy ness of the end

Chelsea Hiatt Farley:

Nice performances. Dynamic, but not too over the top.

Jon:

Wow this is just sweet good job.

Mark Kennedy:

nice to see a smear frame in 3d, or stretch whatever you want to call it. good stuff.

Pablo Piccione:

Excelent!! perfect squash and strech movements...I really like it

Senthilnathan D:

nice acting

Helen Cranston:

Love this. Just think your a little off with the squash of the head on Mr Purple as he turns to the phone. Apart from that tiny bit its fantastic!

Andrew Shipp:

Good hand switch with the phone. The composition is nice and the interaction between characters works well. I find the squash in the head of the purple guy a little distracting at times, such as the end of "authorities" (40). It works well, however, in the blue guy when he says "murder" (135) because the voice has a lot of punch, and the character reflects that.

Jason Smith:

Strong poses good use of squash and stretch... Nice work.

jeff karagianis:

quite impressed with this, your hittin your poses bang on time, and some really nice squash and stretch in there too! my only gripe is i think you could have done more with the blue guy at the start, im not sure having him facing away from the camera helps and when the purple guy turns as he says 'authorities i think maybe there's just too much of a head dip as he turns and then too high as his head peaks before coming back down, it just feels too swingy for me, other than those two little things i thinks it looks great ... really toony with some great expression