Brandon:

Some good poses. But the first character doesn't read well to me.

Russell:

Avoid camera moves! But if you think it is necessary for your shot, keep camera about eye level. Dramatic camera angles don't let animation read very well. Also, the small camera "hand shaking" doesn't help your piece at all. Take it out so the animation can be read easier.

The mouth shapes that are closed should have a frame or two more held. "M""B""P" should have a little extra closing time to be read.

Otherwise, it is pretty solid! I like the acting and the overlap is nice.

Daniel Huertas:

try to find better silouettes in your poses... and be careful with tweening the hands and also your phrasing..

James O'Neill:

There is some good natural overlap. The camera pans are distracting, I feel it could be even stronger with one angle the whole time. There were a few gestures that were twinned, and those look a little weird. Maybe offset those a bit more.

Adam Clark:

The camera movements take over this piece, the acting is pretty good though

Romain Digonnet:

I really like the camera movement !
The animation is pretty good. I would have inversed the movement on "with what". I'd have the hands go down insted of up.

Nolan:

watch out for tweening and your timing is pretty static, with a little more work I think you will have something really great. side note, nice lighting.

sean connolly:

i like the hand held camera effect.

Avner Engel:

I like the camera angels, however the poses could have a little more verity in them.

Jonathan Mitchell:

the camera pan is a lil weird but the animation is cool

Erik Westlund:

The rhythms are good and you some fluid movement here. Your poses work better when you hands at different heights. Two handed gestures on "now" and "cut a deal" are not working. Nice color separation between characters and background.

Natascha Evans:

I like the animation but i dont know why the camera sweeps so far away from them sometimes. And on the first cut of this the character back and face are to us. also the pose on bubkis is too much. You have two poses on that word and you zero around the eye gets lost. I would just make one clear pose at that place.

miles southan:

Really good work. Those buildings in the bg of shot one are distracting with that texture and also his finger tangents with the screen right one. Also, the character totally freezes after saying murder.

Chelsea Hiatt Farley:

The idea of the "0" with the fingers at the end is good, it's just too quick and doesn't read well.

Ken Vass:

nice rendering but audio is wonky and some poses could be better....nice work though!